What Was Right About Last Night

March 15, 2008 at 11:10 am 2 comments

What was right about last night?
The stars, the moon, the evening light?
Was it the chance that brought us to sight
Of a fallen world that seemed alright?

The moon shone bright with a million stars
And God brought near what seemed so far
And revealed to me what good friends are
As we watched the sky within your car

The radio played a familiar song
As you and I just sang along
We knew right then where we belong
Never having felt His love so strong

What was right about last night
Wasn’t the moon and stars so bright
It’s not the way you held me tight
Nor your eyes reflecting the light

But if you were gone and I alone
I wouldn’t miss your cologne
Because in that moment, I was shown
I’ll always be built on the cornerstone


Hurray for inspiration! The inspiration for this poem was a absolutely gorgeous night with a clear sky and about a million stars. When I see a beautiful sky like that I just have to tell my friends, so I called my friend Michael, and it turned out that he was already outside watchinig them. πŸ™‚ So, the truth of this poem ends at line 7! haha! Oh well. I decided to turn it into a slightly romantic poem, but really it’s about how even if I was alone, I would still have God. And what’s better than that?

Entry filed under: God, life, poetry.


2 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Lofter  |  March 15, 2008 at 4:49 pm

    Absolutely right! Which proves that we are never alone after all! πŸ˜€

  • 2. anon4him  |  March 15, 2008 at 7:47 pm

    That’s right πŸ™‚


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